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|| sentences || NAME: Kyle W. Date: 11/1/10 Period:6 || What is a sentense
 * TOPIC: Run on
 * QUESTIONS:

If it needs a direct object

How do u fix a run on sentense. || NOTES: - A sentense has three things in it 1.subject 2.verb 3.complete sentenses -It ﻿﻿ is actually the verb which determines whether the sentence requires a direct

There are four common ways to fix a run-on. Each method is explained below. Write the two independent clauses as separate sentences using periods. || **INCORRECT** || Carmen loved traveling in Italy she felt Rome was too hot. || Use a semicolon to separate the two independent clauses. If you would like to learn more about semicolons, click here. Use a comma and any one of the following connecting words: *when //for// **means** //because// when **//so//** means **//as a result//** Use a semicolon and one of the following words:
 * __ Method #1 __**
 * **CORRECT** || Carmen loved traveling in Italy**.** She felt Rome was too hot**.** ||
 * __ Method #2 __**
 * **INCORRECT** || Carmen loved traveling in Italy she felt Rome was too hot. ||
 * **CORRECT** || Carmen loved traveling in Italy**;** she felt Rome was too hot. ||
 * __ Method #3 __**
 * ** for* and nor but ** ||
 * ** or yet so ** ||
 * **INCORRECT** || Carmen loved traveling in Italy she felt Rome was too hot. ||
 * **CORRECT** || Carmen loved traveling in Italy, but she felt Rome was too hot. ||
 * __ Method #4 __**
 * therefore, thus, however, consequently, ||
 * furthermore, also, nevertheless, ||



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Date:Oct.29th, 2010 Period:6th ||
 * TOPIC: PARALLEL STRUCTURE: || NAME: Ashley Garcia

QUESTIONS: Does it //HAVE// to be Nouns with Nouns or Verbs with Verbs?

What would happen if they use Nouns and Verbs?

What would happen if you don’t end with Clauses? Would anything happen to the Parallel Structures? || NOTES: Two or more words, phrases, and clauses that are similar in how long they are and in grammatical form. Words have to be the same, like a noun has to be with other nouns, and an //–ing// form has to be with other //–ing// forms. When they are not in the same group, it’s called Faulty Parallelism. Ex: · “It is by logic we prove, but by intuition we discover." (Leonardo da Vinci) Definition: Parallel structure is the term writers use to describe similar ideas expressed in similar ways. "I like running, fishing, and to ski" is a poor way to write this, the right way is: "I like running, fishing, and skiing." ||
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